Looking for Constructive Criticism

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Looking for Constructive Criticism
« on: Aug 04, 2017 @ 05:49 PM »
I would love any constructive criticism anyone can provide... especially in regards to my writing. My blog is www.highheelsandhomework.com

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Michelle Carnes



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Re: Looking for Constructive Criticism
« Reply #1 on: Aug 09, 2017 @ 09:29 AM »
You're doing great! One thing I really liked is that you do a good job w/bold text. I noticed you use it a lot but I think you do a great job of framing w/it and kept me reading. That's important with our short attention span online. It had a But wait, this next item is important feel.

I don't really have anything to add in terms of your writing but I was missing a < previous | next > option at the end of your post. So when I finish reading I can keep going either forward or back. As a reader, preferably before all the social media & comment items but strategically possibly lower.  You have 'share this' areas below the post if you needed to make room.

Side note- you have a 20 year old and a 1st grader? Wow. My spread is 1st grader to 14 and it's total madness. I couldn't imaging beyond high school right now. Cheers to you  :) :)

 

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