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Offline DiaryofRainbows

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Are my Title and Tagline Good?
« on: Jul 09, 2016 @ 08:33 PM »
My blog title used to be "A Real Housewife of North Carolina." The tagline was "A diary of rainbows," which matches my URL.

I've now changed the title to Creative, Curvy, Veiled  - and the tagline to Rainbows, Wishes, Dreams.

http://www.diaryofrainbows.com/

Any thoughts? I feel like six descriptors could be too much, but I write about being a curvy woman, creative crafts I do myself and with my daughter, and (recently) my life as a newly veiling Christian.  The tagline is to keep the dreamy feel of my colorful site alive, and to match the URL. Thoughts? Help?


http://www.diaryofrainbows.com/

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Re: Are my Title and Tagline Good?
« Reply #1 on: Aug 01, 2016 @ 10:05 PM »
your site is still down..

you should get that fixed

best of luck,
Ike

 

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